Writing Contest!

Hey, everyone!  I’ve decided to hold a writing contest for anyone who’s interested! The rules are simple:

1.) Choose an opening line from the list below and write a short story with it (entries must be between 100 and 1,000 words).
2.) Send me the story, or a link to it, at kirsten.dani@yahoo.com BEFORE September 30, 2012.
3.) All stories must be suitable for all ages (no excessive violence or sexual themes, etc.).
4.) There are three categories: Humor, Romance, and Mystery. It’s okay if it has two, or even all three; just choose which one you think works the best.
5.) You may enter up to three times: once per category.
6.) If you’d like to change any of the opening lines a little, please contact me about it.

There will be three winners total; One each for the Humor, Romance, and Mystery categories. Even if you have entered more than one story, you can only win once. Each winner will be featured here on GalumptiousWords!

Okay, now here are the opening lines you can choose from:
1.) I have one green eye and one brown eye. The green eye sees truth, but the brown eye sees much, much more.
2.) “Be nice,” my father said. “After all, he’s your brother.”
3.) I think her wings are fake.
4.) If somebody didn’t do something soon, we would have a catastrophe on our hands.
5.) Ms. Fleming’s wig had gone missing.
6.) It had been a great sorrow, a loss more painful than anything he’d felt before.

Remember, anyone can enter, so long as they stick to the rules!

Oh, and HAVE FUN!!

Of Two Minds, by Carol Matas

Rating: 3 stars

Recommended for: Children to young teens who enjoy fantasy and adventure.

I must admit, I was, at first, intrigued by this short little novel after reading the blurb on the back cover. I though it was an interesting and fascinating twist on the whole mind-reading-ability to have everyone else hear your thoughts, too. How would that be? I wondered. Would you be picking up on someone’s thoughts, only to have all your replies and responses broadcast to that person, or the whole room? I was very interested, and I expected a great read.

However, I was sorely disappointed in the story as I read. There was great potential in the writer’s ideas, but she was unable to execute them properly. I felt that there was no real plot at all–just a dull What-Will-Happen-Next-type story. The characters had little depth, had no personalities. I couldn’t even force myself to feel the lest bit sympathetic with their plight, and the part toward the end, when Princess Lenora discovers that the head bad guy of the book is actually her future self, turned into a man, was more creepy and unsettling than surprising.

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